Sunday 21 November 2010

Scirpt further adjustments

We made a few changes to the script last time I posted because when we were filming we found more appropriate words to use whilst filming.

Scene 4:
Kenny whispers, under his breath to Ash
"i can see you"
"I've got you now"

Scene 7:
T (angrily)
"what the hell is this..."
T: (showing Kenny the book- shouting)
"what the fuck is this?
T punches Kenny

Scene 10:
Ash: "T, where you taking me"
T: "we need to get away from this pycho"
Ash: "where we going to go?"
T: "lets go to the forest, for the weekend"
Ash: "Ok"

Scene 19:
T to Kenny
"please don't take me, just take the girl"
Kenny: "you've got 5 minutes to be gone"

Scene 22:
Kenny with higher authority over T, cutting out T's tattoo says:
"there's no need for that no more"

Scene 25:
Kenny engraving Ash' name in his arm
"she's mine now'

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